1 month before ED deadline, help with my commonapp, pls!!!

<p>less than 1 month before ED deadline (take into consideration mailing time)
i'm still stuck with my commonapp essay (this is probably the 4th draft alr)
can you guys read mine and give me some comments?
thanks a lot
URGENT!!!</p>

<p>Hey, I’ll be happy to give you some feedback. ;D PM me!</p>

<p>anyone, pls pls…!!! :(</p>

<p>PM me please</p>

<p>anyone willing to help pls?</p>

<p>i’ll take a look! just send me your essay as an attachment. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

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