<p>do you think i can get a 12 essay with great examples and (i dont know i might not choose to use tough vocab because i really think the people grading it cant "understand" the essay if i use too many tough words) using the generic "essay format"?</p>
<p>which is</p>
<p>when (person) stated this he meant....(this). I dis/a gree with this because..(thesis) which are shown through( ... and ....)</p>
<p>the (first example... shows that (restate thesis)).. then why it support thesis. (Brief overview of ex as an conclusion to 1st body paragraph</p>
<p>same for second body paragraph </p>
<p>i dis/a gree with (thesis presented by person). 2 examples overview again. then i guess ill write something to broaden the topic</p>
<p>I got a 10 last time using this format although i thought that my examples were horrible, I now come in the dec sats with a array of already thought out examples.</p>
<p>If you think this format is horrible, please suggest another one or tweak this one</p>
<p>THANKS</p>