150-word activity essay

College Essays
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<p>Will someone please critique my activity essay for the CommonApp through PM? No 2014-ers please.</p>

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<p>PM is over !</p>

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<p>PM me. I will critique/suggest changes .</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM me. I might be able to help :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me :slight_smile:
I’ll take a good look at it and critique it of course</p>

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<p>pm me if you want. I’ve helped out a few people already. No, I don’t steal essays. So not the drama. :)</p>