1st Draft! Tell me what you think!

<p>It wasn't a difficult topic, but it wasn't one of those simple questions, and I want to see how well I grasped this concept, I'm happy with it, definitely want to see what you guys think.</p>

<p>I'd be glad to read it, what's the prompt?</p>

<p>I'll just send it through PM(both prompt and essay, if I give the prompt then more people might want it, though this is my first essay but I read in the sticky that you don't want to give what colleges you're applying to with the essay). </p>

<p>But do you normally give the prompt in the topic?</p>

<p>I'd like to read it too.</p>

<p>pm it over ill read it</p>

<p>Message it over. =)</p>

<p>I'll give you some constructive criticism. PM it here if you want.</p>

<p>pm if u want..</p>

<p>pm me i'd love to help</p>