<p>Whoo! Myfinaid is up. Only they need me to ‘deliver by hand’ proof of citizenship. Sorta difficult since I’m overseas OTL. But I’ll call them on that…</p>
<p>@Flora6: I don’t have a ‘sample’ per say, but I can give you an overview of what I wrote- I just talked about how there aren’t many extracurricular opportunities here and so the things I did were pretty big (because I think they found my extracurricular activities to be quite sparse). About how the reasons I had a couple of really bad grades was because of my medical condition. And also I talked about why I am interested in Berkeley (aka why their course is interesting). And I had three amazing references from my teachers. As well as a sample of my essay writing. (A very long sample!)
Hope that helps 
Just know that when you appeal, you have to ask yourself this: “Am I appealing because I want to go and they didn’t take me so I’m going to try again? Or am I appealing because I KNOW that I deserve to go there and they overlooked a lot of stuff?”</p>
<p>@wuHooo: I’ll probably take a bunch of classes. Learn how to drive, resume learning the guitar, take singing classes. Perhaps I’ll travel within England- stay with my friend at Cambridge University once she settles down- and travel outside as well. But mainly I think I’ll just learn new and exciting stuff and hang out with my friends 
Oh yeah, and continue teaching so I can make money!
Aaaaand I’m majoring in English 
You?</p>