247 to 150 - Help me condense my "Why ND" essay?

[Ellie7]

<p>Theres a lot I want to say, but not much room!</p>

[Ellie7]

<p>bumping …</p>

[pigs_at_sea]

<p>i’ll help!! pm me! not applying to notre dame</p>

[sylvanna]

<p>I’ll help. PM me =)</p>

[Ellie7]

<p>bu mping .</p>

[Ellie7]

<p>bump again…</p>

[Ellie7]

<p>bummmmmp again</p>

[shuaishuaishuai]

<p>i’ll help you cut down some words.</p>

[rprensner]

<p>You can pm me and I’ll help you.</p>

[Ellie7]

<p>bumpbumpbump</p>

[Ellie7]

<p>Alright, I cut it down to 149.</p>

<p>Now…anyone wanna edit for content?</p>

[nanaboom]

<p>I’ll have a look. I wanted to go there but ended up not applying… pm me</p>