3 Essays for QB Top Schools!

College Essays
1

<p>Hey guys, I am applying to the QuestBridge program (Stanford, Yale, UPenn, Princeton, and MIT) and having just finished my rough drafts, I need people to critique/offer feedback on them.</p>

<p>**Please NO Fellow QuestBridge Applicants (Unless your Essays are set in STONE)!</p>

<p>Also, NO New Members. Thanks!**</p>

<p>Here are the three essays:</p>

<p>1) Biographical Essay (This one is 53 words over limit; Needs to be cut down)</p>

<p>2) Intellectually Exciting Essay</p>

<p>3) Significant Experience Essay</p>

<p>These essays are pretty rough, so please tear em' up!</p>

<p>Please tell me which essays you want to read and I will PM them to you along with the essay prompt.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

2

<p>Someone please help?</p>

3

<p>i'm also doing Questbridge. i'll read #2 because i found that to be the most interesting prompt.</p>

<p>i'll also send you mine if you'd like</p>

4

<p>Thanks stasis! Anyone else?</p>

5

<p>I'm new, but I'll read if you're that desperate... I'll read whichever one you want and give you feedback.</p>

6

<p>I don't even know what questbridge is. Sure I'll have a read for you.</p>

7

<p>Thanks guys! Any others?</p>

8

<p>For sure, not even considering any of those schools.</p>

9

<p>I'm an editor; I will read them if you still need input.</p>

10

<p>I'm willing to read it. I can help with the stanford aspect, although I have only a basic knowledge of QB. I think that 53 words over limit is fine, they wont mind</p>

11

<p>Sure I would love to read and comment on your essays. I've heard about questbridge so I know what they are looking for, but I'm not applying there, so I think I could really help you. Just Email me or PM me : <a href="mailto:Yass1211@hotmail.com">Yass1211@hotmail.com</a></p>

12

<p>I'll read it, though I am doing QB, but I'm already done.</p>

13

<p>I'm not doing QB, but my friend is...(it's the scholarship for talented Jewish kids, right?)</p>

<p>I'm interested in reading! =D Please PM >_O</p>

14

<p>Already sent my application so feel free if you want me to take a look</p>

15

<p>no clue what QuestBridge is, but I can read your essay. number two I guess. I am 09, but obviously not applying QuestBridge</p>

16

<p>Thanks guys for the replies!</p>

<p>However, it seems that the only ones I need help on now are</p>

<p>1)Biographical Essay
3)Significant Experience Essay</p>

<p>I am withdrawing my Intellectual Essay since I am very content with it and the replies it has received. (Sorry zephyavatar)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

17

<p>Pretty new here but I'm positive I'm not applying QB. Ive already got my essay + Sups but would love to read your essays. PM me</p>

18

<p>I'll read the third then :p for once I won't be on the receiving end of comments and criticism :p</p>