500-Word Yale Essay

<p>I just finished my Yale essay and im looking for strong, non-'08 critics to harshly review my essay.</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

<p>Ill take a look at it, pm me</p>

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<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>Sure, I'll edit it for you. PM me.</p>

<p>if you still need help...i'll gladly critique it for you
PM me</p>

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<p>Ill take a look.</p>

<p>I can help you out. I'm already in college.</p>

<p>yep pm it over to me</p>

<p>I am happy to help you.:)</p>

<p>i'd like to help. send it over =]</p>

<p>im an 08er but ive editted many essays in the past on this board!
so ya you can trust me :)
pm me if you want to !</p>

<p>I'll be happy to proofread it. PM me</p>

<p>I can proofread it for you.</p>

<p>I'll be happy to, but I can be too honest.
If you are up for it, send it</p>

<p>Hi there!</p>

<p>I currently work in my university's admission department. Although I don't have a say in the admission decision, I know how they operate and could give you an honest opinion if your essay works or not. I wouldn't mind reading it and proofing it either. Please email it to <a href="mailto:marc.d.tan@gmail.com">marc.d.tan@gmail.com</a>. I look forward to reading your essay!</p>

<p>Sounds Interesting! I would like to help!</p>

<p>me too.</p>