6th draft of my commonapp essay (10 days before sending in for ED) - need help!!

College Essays
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<p>I only have 10 days left before submitting my ED application..
this is my 6th draft of this essay alr.. i think some of you might be familiar with my idea alr..
but help me proofread + critique on the way I write
urgent!!
thanks so much</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>bumpbumpbump</p>

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<p>If you look at mine, I’ll look at yours!</p>

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<p>Don’t share your essay.</p>

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<p>im interested to read :)</p>

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<p>PM me if you like!</p>

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<p>hbrad,
I suggest an English Teacher, or a peer to give you feedback. After all, your English teacher would probably be best on determining if the essay sounds like you!</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want.</p>

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<p>PM me if you want me to read it. I’ve helped out several CC members with their essays already, and they’re quite pleased with my editing.</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it!</p>