7 supplements, 7 top colleges. Help needed!

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I had to write 7 supplements for 7 top colleges. I was wondering if you could:
A) Read and Critique
B) Edit and improve
C) Offer suggestions</p>

<p>Anyone who is willing to do all three please reply to this thread with which essay(s) they wish to help me on. Also, If you need help as well, we could exchange essays. Experienced posters and essay writers only please.</p>

<p>Choices:
1- Johns Hopkins offers 49 majors across the schools of Arts and Sciences and Engineering. on this supplement, we ask you to identify one or two that you might like to pursue here. Why did you choose the way you did? If you are undecided, why didn't you choose? (If any past courses or academic experiences influenced your decision, you may include them in your essay.)</p>

<p>2-Describe your intellectual interests, their evolution, and what makes them exciting to you. Tell us how you will utilize the academic programs in the College of Arts and Sciences to further explore your interests, intended major, or field of study.</p>

<p>3- Describe a personal service experience in your high school or community, what you have gained from this experience, and how it reflects the unique values of the Siena College/Albany Medical College Program:</p>

<p>4- You have been selected to sing in a talent show. What song would you choose? Why?</p>

<p>5- Please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or NYU school/college, and what interests you most about your intended discipline.</p>

<p>6- New York City is an essential element of academic and cultural life at NYU. If you could engage in an activity or start a club or service organization at NYU, what would it be and how would you envision it impacting the larger community?</p>

<p>7- Describe a trait or characteristic that has been passed along to you by your family. Tell us why you like or dislike this aspect of yourself.</p>

<p>Please, I really need help with all of these. Hope you can help,
AZ1698</p>

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<p>Bump, Please guys, i really need help.</p>

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<p>I could help you in 1, 2, and 3.</p>

<p>I have my essays written, so if you don't mind, maybe you could help critique some of mine? And just sit with me and brainstorm a bit about my commonapp idea? That would be GREAT.</p>

<p>Thanks...let me know by PM.</p>

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<p>I'll read 4- I like fun essays like that. :)</p>

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<p>1, 2, 3, 4, and 7.
They seem interesting, especially 7 o_o</p>

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<p>Thanks guys, sent out to all! I really need help, so destory these essays.</p>

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<p>4, 6,and 7 sound interesting... I'd love to help. just PM them...i will have more time over the weekend fyi so I can def. get back to you then if not earlier...</p>

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<p>Thanks coffee! I sent them.</p>

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<p>I can read 1, 4, and 7, if you want! :)
PM me.</p>

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<p>Thanks feed! I sent it.</p>

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<p>I can help on 1, 2 and 4.</p>

12

<p>cool. Anyone else?</p>

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<p>I can help with 2,4,6,7! I really like 4's topic!!
PM me!</p>

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<p>Thanks. ANy others?</p>

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<p>i'd love to read 2,3,5,6... PM me or send them via email = )</p>

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<p>Hey! I'm big on community service. I'm writing one on community service too so I'm interested in 3. Wanna exchange? PM me.</p>

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<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>send them over :)</p>

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<p>You can send me all of them, and I'll critique them all.
Just except to see a reply in half a day or two.</p>

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<p>1,5, and 7 seem interesting. I can get it back to you by Sunday, so PM me...=]</p>