A couple of "find the error"

Test Preparation
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<p>These are from the PSAT booklet that they give when you sign up:
32. [{A)Setting herself}] up [{B)as}] a preserver of the Classical tradition, Clara Shumann was an [{C)outspoken}] [{D)critic toward}] Romantic composer Franz Liszt. [{E) No Error}]</p>

<li>[{A)When looking}] at modern photographs of that area of Indonesia, the effects of the 1883 [{B)eruption of}] the volcano Krakatau [{C)are}] [{D)still evident}]. [{E)No Error}]</li>
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<p>Could someone please explain each of the answers?
Thanks</p>

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<p>is the answer to the 1st 1 c?</p>

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<p>no... these are very subtle...</p>

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<p>oh...well is A the answer to the second 1? sorry if i'm interrupting ur thread :-X</p>

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<p>yup its A...
dont worry ur not interupting anything</p>

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<p>Well for the second problem, I chose A because I think its supposed to be "While" not when..someone correct me if I'm wrong</p>

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<p>The answer to the first one is D, is it not?</p>

<p>Traditionally, you are a critic of someone, not toward them.</p>

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<p>Yah ampersand that makes sense...can you clarify if A is correct for the second 1?</p>

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<p>yes it is D for the first one... and i think your explanation is correct
as for the second... A is correct
Can anyone explain when to use "when" vs when to use "while"</p>