"A failure is a new beginning"- Read my common app essay

College Essays
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<p>Thank god we can't do titles for the Common App essays anymore, because I'd don't know if I can think anymore. Anyways, just poured my heart into prompt 2: "Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?"</p>

<p>First draft was 732 words long, but I managed to cut it down to 650. I'm sure it needs more editing than that. And that's where you all come in. Thank you.</p>

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<p>Go ahead and pm me</p>

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<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>

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<p>I would like to read it and help in away that I can as well.</p>

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<p>Ill read it! PMme!</p>

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<p>I would love to read it. Shoot me a pm :)</p>

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<p>Sounds interesting! Pm me(:</p>

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<p>Yup. Pm me too! :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>If love to read it!</p>

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<p>PM me and ill critique it for you! :)</p>

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<p>PM me I’d like to read it</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll read it</p>

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<p>PM me if you’d like edits/comments!</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll read it as well! :)</p>

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<p>Happy to read it. I write for a living…</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it. PM me?</p>

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<p>can someone read my UC personal statement?</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll read it :)</p>