A little help!

<p>Could anyone (preferably alumni or current students) glance over my "Why Swarthmore?" essay? I would greatly appreciate it. Thank you!</p>

<p>I can help read it if you like (I'm not technically a current student, I guess, but I got in ED1, so I will be? haha). :]</p>

<p>Thanks! Anyone else!?</p>

<p>Sure, I'll read it.</p>

<p>i will too (ed1)</p>