<p>Could someone please read and give feedback on my essay. It's about me about dying a few months ago. I'll pm it to you.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>go ahead and PM me- sounds interesting!</p>
<p>Hry got ur esssay. Ill give u a feedback sometimes this weekend!</p>
<p>Sent from my GT-P1000 using CC</p>
<p>I would be happy to give your essay a read, then give you some (hopefully) constructive feedback, if you would like. </p>
<p>It sounds as though you have a fascinating topic.</p>
<p>I am a parent. If you like an adult to give you some unbiased but potentially harsh comments, I sure don’t mind reading it. :-)</p>