Hello! I was wondering if there was anyone willing to read my common app essay and give some feedback.
I actually have two essays on two different topics, one that was written over the summer and edited by my teacher and another that I wrote this morning (oops) and is still kind of a rough draft. My teacher didn’t find anything wrong with my first essay, but I wasn’t particularly satisfied with it. I would love if someone could read both, but I know that is asking for much. Any advice would be appreciate, and thank you so much in advance!
@jeremyj Hello! I saw that you are offering to critique essays. Could I ask you to give some feedback on my essays? Although you mentioned that we could just PM you, I wouldn’t want to put too much on you since I have two essays that are on the longer side. Thank you very much c:
I do not want to be seen as suggesting that anyone is up to anything inappropriate, but the advice over the years here at CC is to limit sending your essays to people who have an established presence and a track record – not posters who might also be applying to college. I want to congratulate you, however, for not posting your essays in public.