<p>Hello, i am applying to an art school and i would like someone to please review my essay before I send it out. It's about 500 words and I just need some feedback and grammar revision. Please reply if you are willing to read it and I will PM it to you.
Thanks A lot in Advance :)</p>
<p>anyone? Please, this is slightly urgent</p>
<p>I’ll read your essay.
do you mind reading mine as well?</p>
<p>sure! Send me yours and ill send you mine</p>
<p>anyone? Please lol i really really need critiques.</p>