<p>I'm a rising senior who eagerly wants to get accepted by Cornell.</p>
<p>I'm applying with an Early Decision, and I have been investing all my summer to create the best essays!</p>
<p>However, since I came here only when I was a freshman, my inferior grammar structure or unclear expressions are evident in my essays, unfortunately.</p>
<p>I chose to be very creative and vivid because I thought this method could be my last recourse. (along with asking for any help possible from my friends and teachers)</p>
<p>Having been on College Confidential, especially on Cornell University Forum, I have been helped very many times.</p>
<p>Once more, I want to ask another favor to all kind-hearted Cornellians.</p>
<p>Would you guys offer me to read my "Why Cornell Engineering" essay and give me thoughtful insights?</p>
<p>I would really appreciate your help.</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>