<p>ok, so my essays keep turning into an ephiphany essay where I say I experienced _____ and I learned _____. How can I turn this around to sound it more natural so that I don't have to directly state these lines??</p>
<p>Just focus on one incident or moment. Don't try to give a summary of your life.</p>
<p>thanks but I still end up sounding like that. I guess if I don't state it it's too much of a risk? I'm not sure.</p>