I thought the little note at the end of the letter was a nice touch. What did yours say?
PS. Your passion for the environment is commendable. You will find that many students at CWRU share the same love for sustainability!
My younger son’s PS said: “Your experiences in Up A Creek Robotics will serve as a great foundation for your studies at CWRU”. My older son’s PS referred to his music interests. He is a junior at CWRU.
Case does a great job with the personal PS!