<p>Hey! Thank you guys. I unfortunately have decided not to attend Pomona, but hopefully I can be of some help.</p>
<p>For transfer I was accepted at McGill, Davidson, and UPenn in addition to Pomona. I was waitlisted at Columbia. I was rejected from Yale, Amherst, and Williams.</p>
<p>It was a bit different than other schools, because Pomona required its own application to be filled out. One tip – the financial aid forms are due before the application itself! Make sure to get those in!</p>
<p>My stats were as follows:
Applying to transfer as a junior;
APs of 4 in AP Bio and AP Eng. Comp., 5 in AP Eng. Lit.
GPA of 3.8 from Sewanee (The University of the South), a small lac
SAT IIs of 720, 740, and 760
ACT of 34
SAT of 2380
Involved in both branches of student gov’t at Sewanee
Participated in annual dance exhibition at Sewanee (2 years)
Submitted link to various art/video/audio work (not sure if they saw this, even)
Various community service; volunteering at AIDs hospice in high school, tutoring high schoolers and non-native English speakers at Sewanee
Created a club centered around converting an automobile to ethanol
Applied with the intention to major in philosophy and minor in physics </p>
<p>I think the essays play a big role at Pomona, since my stats are okay but nothing super insane (and I received a written comment about my application – not sure how common this is). One of mine chronicled my disappointment with my current institution all the while alluding to Ulysses’ odyssey home, but more focused on what I -did- get out of Sewanee and how it helped me figure out what I really wanted to learn and do. I focused also on what I ideally wanted out of college as far as academics and experience and why Pomona in particular fit the bill. </p>
<p>After you establish that you can get the most out of the school (and why), make sure you portray yourself as yourself. My second essay recounted a very interesting series of greyhound trips, and in it I made sure to reference how the people I encountered affected my eventual volunteering and how the story depicted my desire to extend myself beyond my comfort zone (important parts of who I am) all without simply stating the above or (hopefully) appearing insincere. I tried to include a few humorous episodes as well. (This was something I wasn’t able to include in all of the college apps)</p>
<p>Definitely just show that you have a passion for something and then establish why it “speaks” to you and why it will help you give and take from Pomona. Also ignore anything that isn’t genuine, because if it’s genuine you’ll be able to express why you love doing it and why it’s important for them to know – otherwise they can probably tell you’re doing it just to buff your stats (obviously you don’t have a huge amount of time to find genuine passions, though, so that’s understandable). </p>
<p>Show who you are, but don’t tell. After reading your essays and application they should have an idea of how you act in real life and interact with people, how you will organize and focus yourself in a college environment. </p>
<p>I hope that helps somewhat… definitely ask any questions if you have them! Transferring is difficult. blah.</p>