Activity Esssay- Please Critique!

[Cardsbball77]

<p>Anyone willing to critique?</p>

[slatewater]

<p>sure PM me</p>

[izy2492]

<p>sureee Pm me :]</p>

[DSI]

<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

[truestudent]

<p>Sure, PM me!</p>