Advice and readers for a common app essay?

Hello CC,
First off, I’d like some advice: are religious based essays generally frowned upon? My common app essay is a very powerful story but is also deep-seated in religion.
Secondly, is anyone on here willing to read said essay? It could be tailored for either question common app #1 or #5
Thank you!

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I can help read it!

Probably work best with religious schools. But I think it could still be a good idea. I’m willing to read as well.

I can help!