Advice for Common App extracurricular response question?

<p>The question is "Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences" (1000 characters max). I'm not sure if mine is good enough though. I'm talking about how, as a yearbook staff member, I spend most of my time checking over all the little details since it's the details that help create the emotions of my school's yearbook. I will PM you my whole response if you'd like to read it since I am a little wary of posting it in public. Thank you.</p>

<p>I can read it</p>

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