Advice for CR Q's Dealing with the author's Tone?

<p>For me it seems to be a pattern that the questions I usually spend the most time on for CR since they don't seem to have clear cut answers are the ones that ask you to pick a word to describe the author's tone or attitude towards something. Here is an example of one that I got right but that I had narrowed down to two:</p>

<p>Blue Book Pg. 647 #8</p>

<p>*I'll just put down the first sentence and then the questions, which are probably enough:</p>

<p>The science fiction masterpiece 2001: A Space Odyssey will probably be remembered best for the finely honed portrait of HAL...the computer that could not only reason but also experience human feelings and anxiety.</p>

<p>The author's attitude toward the "portrait" (line 3) is best characterized as one of:</p>

<p>A Resentment
B Appreciation
C Confusion
D Awe
E Derision</p>

<p>The correct answer is B, but I couldn't decide between B and D. The tone is obviously positive so that takes out A, C, and E right away. It seems as though a case can be made for each choice. The explanation of what HAL can do seems to make the case for awe but the way portrait is described seems to show more appreciation. I choice B in the end since awe seemed too intense. What is a good way to figure one out like this, and how can I choose between two choices that connotate the same thing, but one with more intensity?</p>

<p>Here is one I got wrong:</p>

<p>Pg. 676 #11</p>

<p>A condolatory smile, capping this enumeration, materialized on his lips; the letter was so inconsonant with the simplest precepts of strategy that it elicited a kind of pity, mingled with contempt and dry amusement.</p>

<p>In context, Mulcahy's "Condolatory smile" is most probably an expression of both:</p>

<p>A Cynical Skepticism and Comical Self-Pity
B Sincere Compassion and Whimsical Delight
C Profound Surprise and Delighted Appreciation
D Bitter Disappointment and Sly Criticism
E Condescending Sympathy and Amused Scorn</p>

<p>I put down A but the answer is E. I had it narrowed down to the two. Why E over A?</p>

<p>Does anyone have a process for going through these types of questions?</p>

<p>Also, I won't write it but 13 shows the same type of problem (same test as 11) and from that same page, can someone explain why 9 is E over B, if the Blue Book is out in front of anyone? Thanks.</p>

<p>I think in the first instance, the reason that "appreciation" was a better choice than "awe" is because the question asked the author's attitude toward the portrait, not to HAL. The sentence described the portrait as "finely honed". That denotes appreciation, not awe.</p>

<p>In the second example, you could eliminate choice A right away because it mentions "self-pity", while the sentence in question says that the letter "elicited a kind of pity" -- it doesn't mention self-pity. Also, "condolatory" suggests sympathy. That, along with "contempt and dry amusement" lead you to choice E as the correct answer.</p>

<p>It seems like the trick to choosing the correct answer in this type of CR question is not to read more into it than is actually there. The more of these "tone" questions that you practice, the better you'll get at spotting the correct answers.</p>

<p>For #8, the answer is clearly appreciation. No where in the passage or the line does the author express awe at anything. Look at this way - if the tone was awe, it would've hit you in the face, unmistakably. Awe would've been "HAL was an amazingly accurate prediction of future computing potential that demonstrates the characteristic foresight and genius that Stanley Kubrick is universally renowned for." That passage did not express awe.</p>

<p>For #11: Here you really want to avoid what I call convoluted logic. Most people have a tendency to draw more from a reading than what is explicitly stated (these are connotations - and most great writers play upon them for poetic effect). But on SAT passages you strictly want DEnotation, or what is literally said (unless they specifically ask you for connotation - which is rare, but can happen). The same thing happens when you look at answer choices; you think "gee, it could be A or E, since they basically <em>con</em>note the same things. Yet A & E are really quite different, and if you verify them against the text, you will see this.</p>

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"A condolatory smile, capping this enumeration, materialized on his lips; the letter was so inconsonant with the simplest precepts of strategy that it elicited a kind of pity, mingled with contempt and dry amusement."

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<p>For A, we want to check the text for "Cynical Skepticism" and "Comical Self-Pity." First off, no where in the sentence does it say he was skeptical about the letter. No where does he doubt the letters statements, or question its authenticity. So right there you can toss it. But let's check "Comical self-pity." Here's where they try to fool you, because the word "pity" is in the sentence. However, that pity is not directed at himself - he mentions "the letter so inconsonant with the simplest precepts of strategy that it elicited a kind of pity." A pity for who? Pity for the person who sent the letter that he thought was so inconsonant with the simplest precepts of strategy - not him, but his boss. So it doesn't say he feels bad for himself. You can toss it.</p>

<p>For E: Condescending Sympathy and Amused Scorn. Does he have condescending sympathy? Let's look. We find the text says that he feels PITY for his boss, who he thinks has no idea of strategy. Hence, it is also condescending. </p>

<p>Is there amused scorn? Right where it says "contempt and dry amusement." Contempt is a synonym for scorn, and look - they even have "amusement" repeated verbatim in the sentence. Now you know E is the perfect answer.</p>

<p>For #9: This is another example of avoiding convoluted logic and not drawing more than what is said. Let's verify B: "prove that Jocelyn is a poorly run college." Consider the full list of issues: some of them were completely trivial and un-serious (i.e, the history of the 20,000 eggs), and some of them made Mulcahy himself look like a moron "Fought for salary increases and a lightning of the teacher load", rather than make the college look bad. Does it prove that the college is poorly run? No, it doesn't have that primary effect. Yes, there is the part where he talks about "waste in high places," which might imply the college is poorly run - however, 2 out of the 3 listed options don't have the primary effect, and it doesn't stronlgy PROVE that. Further, if the list were intended to make a statement that strong, it would not immediatly shift to Mulcahy's condolatory smile, with not a word more about it. </p>

<p>What I do with an answer choice like that - where part of the statement bears some weight but I don't really like it - is put a small mark next to it. If the other choices are much worst, I may end up selecting it as the best. However, when we get to E...</p>

<p>"Represent a wide range of topics, from the trivial to the serious."</p>

<p>Aha. This is one I like. Again, we're not drawing too much into the passage - the list does EXACTLY that - represent a wide range of topics, from the trivial to the serious. It does, through that mention of waste in high places, kind of IMPLY that the college is poorly run, but does it PROVE it? No. When choosing between a sketchy, unsupported inference, and a 100% true statement, the true statement has to win. E is now clearly the right one. Again, we avoided convoluted logic.</p>

<h1>13: Now, this type of question is the opposite of a problem like 11.</h1>

<h1>11 only requires you to verify the statements against the sentence itself. But this one will require some more holistic analysis, which does require some infering (although still in line with the text, not just imagination). None of the options, including the correct one, are explicitly stated, but you can find out which is the most implied. Instinctively, you should quickly be able to narrow it down to A or B, because the other answers are just god-awful. Now, why is it B over A? Think about A - what does the word "progressive" really mean? Successful and respected? Let's test it: "Bill Gates is the most progressive man in the world." Does that give you any idea that he's successful? No. It does make you think he must be pretty open-minded, though - which clearly matches answer choice B.</h1>

<p>Also, consider the list of issues that the subject of #9. What kinds of actions were Mulcahy committing that got him fired? Pretty controversial ones, right? Whistleblowing on waste, demanding better pay... he was clearly something of a pain in the @$$ to this college. His disappointment with them not being "progressive" (assuming the meaning in answer B) is logical - they weren't open to his new, controversial ideas. On the other hand, if we assume choice A, that argument is not supported. This doesn't disprove answer choice A, but it lends more support to answer choice B, which is already very well supported by our first verification. Clearly, B prevails.</p>