Advice on my artistic sample?

<p>Would anyone be willing to take a look at my artistic sample and give me their opinion? I'm looking for room to make last minute improvements and opinions on the overall piece.</p>

<p>I still need to apply color correction and edit the sound some more, but I have a rough cut complete. If anyone would like to provide me with feedback, just send me a PM and I'll send you the Youtube.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>Would anyone be willing to do this for me?</p>