Advice on my letter

International Students
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<p>Hi guys and girls,</p>

<p>I would really appreciate it if some of you could take a look at my motivation letter (so it's an essay!) for choosing a particular University. The letter goes to my own University but is in English. It mainly concerns checking grammar, but if you could advise me on the content as well that would be great!!</p>

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<p>should be: (so it’s not an essay!)</p>

<p>:S</p>

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<p>PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t mind (I’m not applying this year either). PM if you like.</p>