<p>there is an "and" just in the middle of the sentence where it shouldnt be!!!!! the sentence makes sense if you just omit, and i guess anyone could figure that out, but its a blatant mistake!!!</p>
<p>i dont know how this happened, i read it over like 30 times!!!!!!</p>
<p>Ya, I wouldn't worry about it too much, I made mistakes on both my EA school's essays and got in. I got a little excited after I finished both essays on the afternoon of 11/1 and skipped that proofreading step. Heheh.</p>
<p>i also made a mistake!! i wrote 'to' instead of 'the' ahhhh!!! but i made this mistake on my common app which i sent to 4 unis!!!!!!!!! stupid me...</p>