Almost done with this essay, I need some help on the conclusion though

College Essays
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<p>PM me if you want to read it, I'm applying to some of the Ivies and other schools in the top 30.</p>

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<p>bump.........</p>

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<p>Sure il give it a go</p>

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<p>Yeah, conclusions are the worse. If you'd like, you can PM it to me.</p>