<p>Well it’s not because of how interesting I think I am, it just asked what hardships I have gone through and I merely just wrote them down. Thanks for the feedback though, and uh yeah I didn’t really proof read my grammar at all, I just kind of wrote it and put It on here.
And how I was taught to write an essay is really just the wrong way to write an essay in my opinion. But alright thank you guys for the feedback.</p>