Alright so is this way to excessive for an application essay.

<p>I know, I totally agree, but some people are just looking to steal ideas, and that’s never very nice. Even if a life story is truly unique, they’ll find a way. </p>

<p>I can’t really give you any concrete advice if it’s right or wrong, as I’m barely a highschool senior, but personally, I think it’s a good topic. Although, I’d go more into detail about how it changed you as a person, you know? Not just telling a story about your life. Although, if even I can tell that you’ve overcome hardship on your own and made the best of your situation, I doubt a veteran admissions officer will have a problem. But you know, I’m just putting that out there. Someone with more experience on CC should go right ahead and correct me if I’m wrong.</p>