am i gonna get anywhere with this!?!?!

[imafantana]

<p>please will someone read my essay and give me some suggestions?
i dont think its good :(</p>

[hectorbo]

<p>I'll be glad to read it. PM me.</p>

[ColdWind]

<p>Yes, I'll read & critique your essay.</p>

[biology91]

<p>I'll read it.</p>