Am I On the Right Track?

<p>Please read over my commonapp essay's introduction.
It is about my summer job and how humbling it has been.
Feel free to be as harsh as you'd like; I'd like to know now if it is miserable rather than after I've put my heart and soul into it.</p>

<p>Pm me if you want</p>

<p>pm me, too if you want.</p>