<p>actually, it's not. not even close. </p>
<p>that's why I need help. </p>
<p>anyone want to read/critique?</p>
<p>anyonee???</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it!</p>
<p>actually, it's not. not even close. </p>
<p>that's why I need help. </p>
<p>anyone want to read/critique?</p>
<p>anyonee???</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it!</p>