<p>I'm having financial aid troubles with Amherst College. Below is the appeal letter I sent. It explains my predicament pretty well. I removed numbers for the sake of privacy, but I replaced them with estimates. Based on my situation, what's the likelihood of getting aid? Why do assets have such a large impact on my aid? Do they expect us to sell our house so I can go to college? Otherwise my loans coming out of undergrad would be overwhelming...</p>
<p>I have just received my financial aid package and would like to appeal.
I understand that you have determined that I have to pay full tuition. However, I believe that the aid office may have overlooked some key details in my family's income and expenses that cannot be seen simply by evaluating our tax returns and assets. According to FAFSA, our expected family contribution is less than 10k. Paying full tuition would mean paying six times the amount the federal agency believes we can afford. I have been told that this discrepancy is due to our assets. My parents do own our house and business, but our family's monthly income after taxes is minimal, and the majority of it goes toward paying off the mortgage for my home. The house listed under our name actually costs us more because of the mortgage, rather than providing us with disposable income that can go toward my tuition.
Amherst College is my dream school. I am inexplicably thrilled to be accepted, and would be devastated if I could not attend due to my parents' inability to pay the amount requested of them. My parents cannot afford to pay this much for my education, but I cannot imagine myself anywhere else, even if another school can provide us with more aid. Amherst College's Financial Aid has been reputed to be generous, meeting 100% demonstrated need. I would deeply appreciate if you reconsidered the amount my parents are expected to pay. It would mean the world to me if I could go to Amherst College with a tuition that my parents can afford.
That being said, I did sit down and discuss with my mom the amount my parents spend just to support our family. Hopefully this will help administrators determine how much aid my family would need. Our monthly breakdown is as follows: (bunch of numbers)</p>
<p>As you can see, the amount my parents have left over does not add up to much. My parents' savings aren't extensive (less than 5k) and they do not have a trust or any savings under my name. I also have a younger sister who will be going to college in the 2015-2016 academic year, and my parents would like to plan ahead and save to pay for her education as well.
My mother is looking for another job to help my father in anticipation for tuition costs, but she hasn't been employed full-time outside of our family business since before I was born (right now, she is working part-time during the tax season). It will be very difficult for her to bring more income into our family budget.
Thank you so much for your time, and I hope you will be able to help me enroll at Amherst College in the Fall.</p>