<p>Hi! Can someone halp me with my Amherst essay? I finished it, but need some feedback!</p>
<p>Topic: "Stereotyped beliefs have the power to become self-fulfilling prophesies for behavior"</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>do you want to switch</p>
<p>amherst supplement for my penn supplement?</p>
<p>Yes sure, PM me for my & your email address, isn’t that easier?</p>
<p>More volunteers? =)</p>
<p>we can do a little exchange 
if you wouldn’t mind, could you email them to me? i like to write suggestions/ideas in red. <a href="mailto:christinehou2192■■■■■■.com">christinehou2192■■■■■■.com</a></p>
<p>I just finished my Amherst essay, if you want to swap (I did the literature one)</p>
<p>yeah sure, send it to me.
<a href="mailto:dj.jliu@gmail.com">dj.jliu@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>I don’t know anything about amherst but i can definitely help with writing style and grammar :)</p>