An essay about a scam: is it suitable?

<p>So I wrote an essay for the common app on the topic relating to the ethical dilemma, etc topic. It's rather unconventional and I'm not really sure it's suitable. I'd like somebody to take a look at it. I'd be very thankful to anybody who would devote some of their time to reading it.
If you wanna take a look PM me and I'll send you the link.</p>

<p>Thanking you all in advance.</p>