An Essay Needing Criticism

College Essays
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<p>A first attempt at an essay, probably too personal, by someone who has no idea what admissions is looking for. Would appreciate any kind of advice/criticism/anything.</p>

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<p>Sure. Feel free to PM it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it. Is it an essay from the common app btw? (And whats the topic?)
Always helps when editing.</p>

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<p>any more takers?</p>

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<p>i'd like to read it :) PM me</p>

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<p>sure please PM me.</p>

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<p>id like to read it, but im '09. i also have no idea what admissions officers are looking for.</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read it also. PM it over.</p>

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<p>just send it ill read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM me :)</p>