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<p>Assignment : Is the purpose of education to change the world ?
My essay -
The purpouse of education is to change the way people look at things , and see them as they truly are . Broadening people's horizons change the way they look at things , and in turn ,they change everything around them . Evidence of this is seen in history as well as in the movie "Dead Poet's Society ".</p>

<p>In nineteenth century India , more than half the population was illiterate . Many social reformers set out to change this situation . Many schools and universities were set up where students were educated on a variety of subjects . With the degrees the students earned on graduating , they were subject to a wide variety of options . They could become lawyers , bankers , doctors . Children of farmers and manual workers did not have to stay in the same occupation and had a choice . Now , they had the freedom to get what they deserved , through hard work and dedication .In this way ,education was able to change the lives of students who otherwise would live their lives in poverty and ignorance .</p>

<p>Another way education changed modern India , was that the enlightened and educated people now saw the injustice of the British rule . They formed political parties , held protests and stood up against racism and oppression and were ultimately able to free India and establish a democratic and secular country .</p>

<p>In the movie "Dead Poet's Society " , John Keats is an English professor in a very strict boy's hostel . Throughout the movie , he inspires his students and imbibes the idea of "Carpe Diem " or "Seize the Day" in their minds . The teacher and the poems he has read in class , inspires one student to confess his love to a girl he knows , a task which he would otherwise be hesitant to perform . In fact , even upon rejection , he persists and convinces her that she should be with him . In this way ,the teacher through his education and inspiration, helps a student change his world and his attitude towards life.</p>

<p>Education has and always will change the lives of people in personal as well as much bigger ways than they can imagine . The purpouse of education is to broaden people's horizons and this changes the society and the world we live in .</p>

<p>Very well written, however don’t space out your punctuation. They definitely won’t accept that. </p>

<p>Purpouse is spelled purpose. Just a heads up so you get everything right.</p>

<p>Another tip is to include only about India’s education and remove the details about the movie, it is not strong enough, keep the statement about India, it is very well stated.</p>