<p>I just re-read the essay that I used for Penn (deferred), and I'm having second thoughts about using it for my regular decision schools. This could be beacuse I'm just superstitious, but it could also be because it's just not a very good essay. If any experienced parents could leave me their e-mail address and take a look at the essay I would greatly appreciate it.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>bump? I've written a new essay for the common app, decided to get rid of the old ones. Could someone read it? I'm not looking for corrections, just a good/try again judgment.</p>
<p>send it to me by PM.</p>
<p>marite I sent it, thanks. If anyone else is willing to take a look as well, I'm eager to hear as much feedback as possible</p>
<p>Marite had some great comments and I've improved the essay; we both like it a lot. Unfortunately neither my dad nor the two friends I showed it to think it's good. Now I'm just confused. Anyone wanna help me out?</p>
<p>I'm not a "parent," but I could give you my comments. Just send it to me by PM.</p>
<p>You can send it to me by email (in my profile). Will reply tomorrow.</p>
<p>same here.....</p>
<p>pm me and I'll critique it.</p>
<p>Lemme try. "PM" me, and I'll also try to critique. My, I'm on a roll today. I swear, I should really be busier right now but I'm not.</p>