Another essay

Applying to College
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<p>I just finished my first draft of my second essay. The question was basically, "Tell us something about yourself we couldn't have known from the rest of the application."</p>

<p>If you could help me out, please post here and I'll PM it to you (it's 558 words and I wouldn't mind getting it under 500). Any critiques/suggestions you have would be great!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>i'll read it. PM me and I'll give you good input. Also, would you be willing to read mine? I have 2 rough intros to essays that I want to write. </p>

<p>Thanks,
Mike</p>

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<p>I'll read both your essays, just PM em.</p>

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<p>I can help. Just PM!</p>

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<p>I'll read.</p>

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<p>I'll read. just PM</p>

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<p>Sure, PM :]</p>