<p>hmm anyone want to critique mine? I've gotten really mixed reviews from people, so I don't know... anyways, please be harsh and specifically comment on if it sounds too whiny/unnatural/weird. thannnnkss =]</p>
<p>i WILL PLZ</p>
<p>i'll do it</p>
<p>hey, i'll read it + be harsh :)</p>
<p>i'll take a look
i dont know if i can get back at you with comments before tomorrow if you're applying scea though</p>
<p>ill help too if you are interested</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>i'll read too =)</p>
<p>I wouldnt mind reading</p>
<p>I;ll critique it</p>
<p>I'll look.</p>
<p>throw one my way via pm.</p>
<p>woah wait how did this thread get resurrected after a month?</p>
<p>i'd love to</p>
<p>lolll wow okay guys. I submitted it already, but I'll PM it if you wanna look anyway.</p>
<p>aw, i want to see! :)</p>
<p>i'll have a go</p>
<p>I'd love to</p>
<p>i will, pm me</p>