<p>....I don't think I answered the question for the MIT prompt</p>
<p>Essay B Describe the world you come from, for example your family, clubs, school, community, city, or town. How has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations?</p>
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<li>I did not really address "shape you dreams....." I talked about my leadership roles as a big sister...</li>
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<p>gack! i don't think I can rewrite ><</p>
<p>Did you talk about how your leadership roles have affected say your outlook on life, your perspectives, maybe how you approach new situations? I take the second part of the prompt ("How has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations?") to ask you to talk about what sort of impact it has had on you, not just stating that it happened (does that make sense?)</p>
<p>Hmmm....I think I can do that....
Thanks...</p>