Any admits willing to read two versions of the same essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>Hello. Would any admits be interested in reading two versions of the same essay and telling me which they like better? It shouldn't take very long, and I would greatly appreciate some feedback :-) </p>

<p>If anyone is willing, feel free to PM me your email address so I can send them (i find sending them through a PM is too cumbersome and messy). </p>

<p>BTW: The essays are ~870 and ~730 words if you're wondering. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>hmmm...looks like no one wants to look at my big essays. Would anyone care to look at my short (400-500) word essays for the supplement question? I wrote two, and they're about completely different things, but I'm having a hard time choosing which one to send in.</p>

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<p>SURE!
Send it me! PM!!! it to me
I am willing.</p>

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<p>sure....pm?</p>

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<p>PM me the long essay. I'll see what I can do.</p>