<p>IT is unedited and unrevised. Try to edit for content and grammer please</p>
<p>sure...message me it</p>
<p>I would love to...message me it!</p>
<p>ill take a look at it</p>
<p>sure send on . pm me</p>
<p>sure I can look at it.</p>
<p>PM me I can lokk at it.</p>
<p>I'll look at it</p>
<p>I was accepted to cornell last year. If you send it to <a href="mailto:xsallyz@gmail.com">xsallyz@gmail.com</a> I can edit it/give you lots of suggestions and give you my essay from last year</p>
<p>pm me please</p>
<p>i can surely help</p>
<p>Sure, glad to help you out. Send it over.</p>
<p>hey scooberwiz i'm applying to cornell as well...could i send you my essays as well...and get some suggestions as well?</p>
<p>i applied and got into cornell - didnt go there, but send it over</p>
<p>hey scooberwiz can you email you yours and then I'll email you mine once I feel its ready to be looked at. I would like to get a feel for what it should look like</p>