<p>I'm a '14-er (d'oh) who has come up with two essays in two spontaneous literary bursts: one about dancing, and the other about garbage (it's NOT revolting, I swear. And it's not about dumpsters).</p>
<p>Which one would you like to read? Or if you're willing to check out both, there's nothing like it.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>I’ll take a go at it. I am a 2013er. You can send both if you wish. PM me for my email address if you want.</p>
<p>Wait, there is a supplemental essay for '14s? I am sorry 
or are you talking about the common application essay? Might want to make that clear. If it’s a new dartmouth specific essay supplement, send it to me and I’ll take try to look at it if I have time. However, do look into the dartmouth application requirements. For the '13s we only had to send in the common app and a third party letter.</p>
<p>Oh no no no. No talk of a supplement, as far as I know! I just wrote these two pretty impulsively, and then I was like ‘Hey…these aren’t too bad!’. So yeah, they’re for the Common App. You still in (for the reading bit, I mean)?</p>
<p>I’ll read both. I’m a '12.</p>
<p>Sending them right over. Thanks.</p>
<p>Yeah sure, but I may not get around to it for a while.</p>
<p>Not an issue. I’ll PM you.</p>
<p>I’ll be glad to look at both of your essays~
Just send em over 
2013 here</p>
<p>PM me your essay and I’ll respond sometime tomorrow with grammatical corrections, stylistic recommendations, et al. I was accepted to the Class of 2013, if you’re wondering.</p>
<p>Sending 'em over to both of you</p>
<p>I’m an international '13, will be glad to have a look at it ;)</p>