Any one want to read my new essays?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Cornell University
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<p>Hey guys, since my last two essays were really boring and generic, I have rewritten both my common app essay and my Cornell supplement essay. And it's really hard to assess my own essays, especially when I have been staring at them for the past four days. So could you guys help me to give some feedbacks on the content and style of my essay? </p>

<p>Please leave a message and I will PM my essays over. Also, please disregard the grammatical mistakes, as I haven't gotten to them yet. Thank you so much for your help!</p>

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<p>But you already applied to Cornell ED rite?</p>

<p>so, why are u re-writing them again when the decisions come out on thursday? lol.. or is it for a possibility that you might get deferred?</p>

<p>anyway, PM me,, i'll be happy to read it :)</p>

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<p>thanx a lot jae! I think I have a good chance of being deferred, and I really don't want to rush my essays. Anyone else wanna help..? please..?</p>

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<p>sure i'll help ;-)</p>

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<p>i am more than happy to read it...
PM me!!</p>