<p>Would any parents would be willing to read my essay and provide some feedback on it? So far, I showed it to my English teacher and she loves it, but I would like more feedback from different people. So if you don't mind reading it, I can send it to you as a private message.</p>
<p>Thanks so much! :)</p>
<p>I would be happy to read, but what is it for? A late rolling admissions college app? Are you a junior? Transfer app?</p>
<p>You can send it to me, and I'll take a look.</p>
<p>Thanks so much for all your responses. I will send it to you now. Anyone else willing to read it?</p>
<p>Once again, thanks! :)</p>
<p>I would be happy to read it.</p>
<p>Hello, </p>
<p>I attempted to send it to all of you via a private message, however, apparently my essay is too long and so I am unable to send it this way. Would any of you mind if I emailed it to you? If so, could you please tell me your email address?</p>
<p>Thanks so much! :)</p>