Any parents wish to read my "Why Duke" Essay?

<p>Anyone, I'll PM to you guys. I really hope for mostly grammatical and content feedback. Just promise you use any material.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>Hi,
I am not a Duke parent but you can PM it to me. I've seen other 'Why College X' essays before. I know Duke only superficially but I can check for grammar (and maybe content). Also, I might reply on Saturday or Sunday, though.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>