Any prospective essay readers?

College Essays
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<p>Hai~
I just finished a potential college essay-- I'm not sure if it's exactly what colleges are looking for, but I believe that it reflects my personal voice, if nothing else.
The topic is slightly strange, but would anyone like to read it-tsu, and possibly offer some critiques? I would appreciate it much~! :D</p>

<p>Please post if interested~</p>

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<p>i’ll read! pm me</p>

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<p>I’m here for a bit. PM and i’ll read it/give feedback.</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

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<p>ill read and critique for you! pm it over</p>

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<p>I’ll give feedback, PM me!</p>

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<p>Id love to read it</p>

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<p>i’ll read it; pm me</p>

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<p>Sure PM it over.</p>