any reader for int' student's essay? i need some help

College Essays
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<p>any reader for int' student's essay? i need some help<br>
I need some help on my grammar and essay structure. thx a lot. much appreciate</p>

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<p>i will focus more on the grammar. send it over!</p>

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<p>i had sent it to u</p>

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<p>I'll read.</p>

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<p>i need some comments.</p>

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<p>i'll read for u.</p>

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<p>i had made some adjustment, thx polarns</p>

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<p>hi, im an international from australia. send it over and i'll check it for you.</p>

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<p>sent^^^^^^^</p>

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<p>Yes, please PM it to me, and if you could, tell me the college you have in mind. I feel that the strength of the essay varies with what colleges an applicant is applying to.</p>

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<p>sent^^^^^^^</p>

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<p>can i have some comments plz?</p>

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<p>lol dude i'll edit urs 4 u
my grammar's wonderful</p>